The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries

The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries
The bar chart illustrated data about three issues including
language
, accommodation and friendship that immigrants between 18 and over 55 face when start living in other societies.
Overall
, the biggest problem among the community of adolescents and adults is making friends with a percentage of 46%.
Although
,
language
is the most demanding challenge among the public over 55 with an incidence of 54%. As the chart indicated, learning a new
language
was the least challenging subject for the immigrants between 18 and 34 years old with approximately 30%
while
for about one-third of the population between 35 and 54 and more than half of those over 55 was problematic.
On the other hand
, housing and making friends have more similar percentages among these groups. As 40% of the group between 18 and 34 had difficulty finding a suitable place for living, 46% of them had a problem with friendships. Despite a challenging matter in
language
for the elderly, they had the least trouble in place and making friends which was respectively 22% and 23%.
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