The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in the other countries
The bar chart illustrated data about three issues including
language
, accommodation and friendship that immigrants between 18 and over 55 face when start living in other societies.
Overall
, the biggest problem among the community of adolescents and adults is making friends with a percentage of 46%. Although
, language
is the most demanding challenge among the public over 55 with an incidence of 54%.
As the chart indicated, learning a new language
was the least challenging subject for the immigrants between 18 and 34 years old with approximately 30% while
for about one-third of the population between 35 and 54 and more than half of those over 55 was problematic.
On the other hand
, housing and making friends have more similar percentages among these groups. As 40% of the group between 18 and 34 had difficulty finding a suitable place for living, 46% of them had a problem with friendships. Despite a challenging matter in language
for the elderly, they had the least trouble in place and making friends which was respectively 22% and 23%.Submitted by nooshinhabibinejad on
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