Nowadays, mobile phones and the internet have become increasingly important in people’s social life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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The
Internet
is a global computer network providing a variety of information and communication facilities and it is developing stronger
day
by
day
, now, everyone uses technology devices to meet their needs. Of course, each has its advantages and disadvantages. I elaborate on both merits and demerits of the
internet
in
this
essay.
Firstly
,about the benefits of using the
Internet
. We can learn much knowledge from the
internet
by joining the fan page which posts some articles about the lesson, and the language,…So if we surf the
internet
we can meet a lot of good essays to read.
Secondly
, we can relax. All
day
we are focusing on class, company, and housework which is very stressful if you never
use
any games, or film to feel more comfortable. So we can find many films, games, to watch and play to relax.
Thirdly
, we can chat with our
friends
online. One
day
if you leave school and you can not meet your
friends
,
then
you can turn on your phone and chat with your
friends
to ask about your class and other
friends
.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages occur everywhere on the
internet
, Now the demerits of the
internet
are discussed on
this
page.
Firstly
,about the disadvantages. There are a lot of children who
use
social apps like Facebook,
and
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Instagram, Tik Tok but their parents do not know. They can chat with strangers on their phones. Even they can watch toxic video clips like school violence, kick, and hit,… and they will be affected by it.
Next,
if we
use
smartphones excessively we can get nearsighted even blind. You know wearing glasses is very unseemly and expensive. Nowadays, occurring a lot of swindling. When we receive a link from a strange account and we click it. Our account will be lost. In conclusion, we need to
use
the
internet
and smartphone logically and we should distinguish wrong and right. Especially children. They should
use
social when they have parents’ supervision.
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