the two maps compare the changes of the community center

the two maps compare the changes of the community center
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Presented are the two maps exhibiting the changes in the
layout
of = the design of a
community
centre
from past to present. As transparent from the maps, the function of the
community
centre
is simplified = simpler with the change in the
layout
. In the past, there was a small entrance in the north of the
community
centre
leading to the car park located in the east part of the whole site.
Additionally
, to its southwest corner, a large garden was situated, occupying one-third of the western area of the map. The remaining facilities of the
community
centre
include a cafe and two meeting rooms built on the west, and an art
room
, an IT
room
and a gym were erected = constructed/ built on the east. At present, the parking lot has been expanded
further
= increasing in size to the west of the original one, occupying almost 75% of the whole
layout
.
Moreover
, the area of the garden and a part of the gym has been converted into = changed into a reception area/ section. The IT
room
has been extended slightly = became a bit bigger,
while
the size of the art
room
has shrunk = decreased.
However
, there was no change observed in the rest of the
layout
including the two meeting rooms whose position is retained = which remained the same as that of the original ones.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words layout, community, centre, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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