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Some people believe the purpose of education should be to help the individual to become useful to society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Since the beginning,
education
 is
very
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 important topic for many of us so
people
 argue about
education
. Some of them believe that
education
 is good for
society
 and others claim that teaching helps personal aims. From my point of
view
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 tutoring must have for
better
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 community. First of all, Human beings who teach for personal targets won’t be useful for civilization because
according to
 recent
researches
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 from California University, mankind who educate for personal ambitions have some psychological problems.
Such
 as Unigma. Unigma
people
 just care about themself and become selfish
people
.
At the end
 of the day, we don’t have lonely lives. Mankind lives together.
On the other hand
, some
people
, including me, believe that if
people
 educate
for
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 problems and
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lacks
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of
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society
, these
people
 have
good
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 effect on their country.
For
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initially
, in the past,
in
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Japan, didn’t have any engineers
hence
 they had no quality technologies until now. Nowadays, there are a lot of Japanese engineers and these engineers lead to many good things.
Moreover
, when
people
 work for
society
,
people
 have better lives. Crime rates are going to decrease and economical issues can
will
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end in the future. In conclusion, taking everything into consideration I strongly claim that the advantages far outweigh and more
logical
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 the disadvantages occasionally
people
 who teach for
society
 can change
world
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 and have many beneficial things for civilization
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therefore
 other humans who educate for personal goals just improve themself.
Purpose
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 of
education
 must be for the community.
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