The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the development of a university
campus
from 2010 to now.
Overall
, the university extends its area and also
provides student
facilities these days than previously.
To begin
with, we can see that there are limited facilities in 2010. Shops have been converted into student
accommodation and extending student
accommodation has been extended. In the past ,teaching blocks contain the arts and science departments. However
, it has been built separately building, the science building used to be university offices.
Moreover
, another existing student
accommodation which was located on the left side of campus
has been replaced by student
facilities building that contains shops , offices and other services . The lack has remained unchanged that located in the middle of the campus
. On the contrary
, the seating area and garden have been removed from the campus
. In addition
, the restaurant has been also
removed and built footpath,which easily connects to every building on the campus
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