The graph below shows how much money a city council gave to book clubs over a four-year period.
The provided line graph illustrates information about how much capital the city council spent on bookshops over a four-year period.
Overall
, despite the bulk of funds spent on books and the number
of book club members
fluctuating a lot over the given number
of years, the difference at the end
of the period what almost the same as at the begging.
While
the amount of money increased in the first two years, the number
of members
decreased. Furthermore
, in the third ,year the amount of given money increased rapidly from the number
of about 20,000 to about 40,000. The number
of club members
,on the other hand
, went up from approximately 13,000 to exactly 25,000.
Although
both of the categories grew up the amount of donated money slightly decreased to 35,000. The number
of members
on the other side increased in fours year to exactly 30,000, which is double the initial number
of book club participants.Submitted by gafarbeylialibey on
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