The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.

The chart below gives information about the level of education of Bulgarian people who wanted to go and live in another country in 2002, 2006 and 2008.
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The bar chart compares the level of
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of Bulgarians who planned to emigrate
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to other countries at three different points in time: 2002, 2006, and 2008.
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, the majority of Bulgarian
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who wanted to go and live in another country had
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secondary
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While
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the proportion of
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with higher
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rapidly went down over the provided period, the opposite trend was true for the
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of those with primary or lower
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. The highest
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of
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in all three years was for those with secondary
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figure fell slightly throughout the six-year period, from 65% in 2002 to 61% in 2006 and 59% in 2008.
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, there was a significant change in the other categories. In 2002, 17% of Bulgarian
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who left the country had higher
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and 18% had primary or lower
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, and those figures increased slightly to 20% and 19% in 2006, respectively.
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, the
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of
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with primary or lower
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saw a dramatic increase and stood at 32% two years later,
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the opposite happened with the figure for
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who had received higher
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, as that
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fell by 11% in 2008.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emigration
  • tertiary education
  • secondary education
  • primary education
  • trend
  • intentions
  • emigrate
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • fluctuation
  • statistics
  • depict
  • overseas
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • pattern
  • move abroad
  • educational attainment
  • time frame
  • compare
  • contrast
  • analyze
  • summarize
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