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The pandemic situation emerges worlwide and Uzbekistan may face different risks in different fields. As Uzbekistan education system has been transferred to distance learning, the attitude of students may change towards the education. What is your opinion about this phenomenon? Give your opinion with examples.

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It is true that the pandemic effect people globally but Uzbekistan hits hard with it in every sector, where learners are helpless to shift to online learning that the reason they suffer in their
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. The main reasons for it are lack of interaction and being easily distracted as well.
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, class are the best place to study because it provides the proper ambition that requires for study.
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 get proper supervision and interact with teachers which helps them to solve their problems.
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, in Covid 19 everyone is stuck in their homes. Even
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 are forced to do academics online
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, some
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 face trouble asking questions to their teachers that totally affect their
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.
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, learners use their computers and mobile to do
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 or join online classes but at home , they face a lot of distractions because children are totally exposed to games and social sites.
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 online teaching it is difficult for teachers to do attention to everybody. So, some trainees use these applications in between
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.
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 ,Recent
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 show that 90% of
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 confessed, they do not give proper attention in an online
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 and find cut off themselves from their online coaching. In conclusion,
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 online teaching helps
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 to continue their
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, it is unable to give them a proper environment where they study hard and not get distracted easily.

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