Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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A lot of money is burnt at marriage events which many people think is unnecessary.

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, others think that it is once in a lifetime moment and worth spending that amount on. In my opinion, these are once-in-a-lifetime moments that are worth spending some wealth but at the same time, one should not waste useful resources.

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essay will discuss both arguments and derive a logical conclusion. The wedding is a special occasion in a person's life and everyone wants it to be memorable. When many guests are invited, the couple has to ensure that the proper arrangements are

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for their food and accommodation.

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, in order to make

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perfect, a significant sum is spent on the decorations, location and food. Since

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is an emotional event in people's lives, they don't hesitate to go beyond their limits by having a big menu at the feast.

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, many couples these days are having an exotic destination wedding to start their new journey, which

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them a lot.

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, there are couples who want to keep

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as a small affair without any lavish celebration. Because these people contend with a small-scale celebration, they advocate spending a minimum amount for their event. These pairs often think of the future and what they can do with the money saved during the celebration.

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, some couples tie the knot among close family members

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avoiding unnecessary spending on decorations and food. In conclusion,

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saving money is necessary, one should not ignore the special moments of life

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as weddings and should spend in an optimal way which will capture the moments

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avoid waste. In my opinion, a balance between both of these is necessary.

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph is logically connected to the previous one, and that the overall structure of the essay follows a clear sequence of introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Additionally, use linking words and cohesive devices to improve the flow and coherence of the essay.

task response

Your essay responds to the prompt by discussing both views and providing your opinion, and provides relevant examples to support your ideas. However, make sure to address both views in more detail and provide a more comprehensive analysis of each perspective.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

extravagant
waste of money
financial burden
priorities
materialistic values
unrealistic expectations
special occasion
celebration
strengthening relationships
social bonds
boosting local economies
creating jobs
lasting memories
financial responsibility

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