Some people think that spending a lot of money on wedding parties and other celebrations is just a waste. Others, however, think that such events are necessary, so spending money on them is acceptable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
A lot of money is burnt at marriage events which many people think is unnecessary.
However
, others think that it is once in a lifetime moment and worth spending that amount on. In my opinion, these are once-in-a-lifetime moments that are worth spending some wealth but at the same time, one should not waste useful resources. This
essay will discuss both arguments and derive a logical conclusion.
The wedding is a special occasion in a person's life and everyone wants it to be memorable. When many guests are invited, the couple has to ensure that the proper arrangements are done
for their food and accommodation. Verb problem
made
Further
, in order to make this
perfect, a significant sum is spent on the decorations, location and food. Since this
is an emotional event in people's lives, they don't hesitate to go beyond their limits by having a big menu at the feast. For instance
, many couples these days are having an exotic destination wedding to start their new journey, which cost
them a lot.
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costs
On the other hand
, there are couples who want to keep this
as a small affair without any lavish celebration. Because these people contend with a small-scale celebration, they advocate spending a minimum amount for their event. These pairs often think of the future and what they can do with the money saved during the celebration. For example
, some couples tie the knot among close family members and
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apply
thus
avoiding unnecessary spending on decorations and food.
In conclusion, although
saving money is necessary, one should not ignore the special moments of life such
as weddings and should spend in an optimal way which will capture the moments as well as
avoid waste. In my opinion, a balance between both of these is necessary.Submitted by yoursvicky129 on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph is logically connected to the previous one, and that the overall structure of the essay follows a clear sequence of introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Additionally, use linking words and cohesive devices to improve the flow and coherence of the essay.
task response
Your essay responds to the prompt by discussing both views and providing your opinion, and provides relevant examples to support your ideas. However, make sure to address both views in more detail and provide a more comprehensive analysis of each perspective.