The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The amount of
meat
, salt
and fish
consumed per week
in China from 1985 to 2010 is shown in the line graph.
Overall
, it is clear that
there was an upward trend in fish
and meat
consumption
throughout the period. By contrast
, people consumed
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who consumed
salt
fell.
In 1985, the fish
intake was 600 grams
per week
, which was 6 times more than meat
consumption
. Next 10 years, the line rallied to 700 and then
slipped back to the starting point. Those people who ate fish
rose considerably till 2010 with a final result of 850 grams
per week
. The
Correct article usage
Meat
meat
consumption
had
increased gradually and doubled after 25 years from 100 to 200 Unnecessary verb
apply
grams
per week
.
Meanwhile, salt
had a sharp downfall all over the period. Starting at almost 500 grams
, which was close to the fish
intake. Every 5 years the amount of salt
eaten was decreased by around 100 grams
. Eventually, it reached 200 grams
per week
crossing with the meat
consumption
.Submitted by dnm.best on
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