The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1985 and 2010.
The maps show the
changes
that took place at Queen Mary Hospital between 1960, 1980, and 2000.
Overall
, the construction of the three maps reveals a transformation from a small hospital to a larger hospital.
In 1960, the shopping center
, hospital, farmland, and car park occupied an equal portion of space near the main road. Change the spelling
centre
However
, over the next 20 years, the hospital had
experienced a number of significant Unnecessary verb
apply
changes
. Further
development included the construction of a pharmacy near the hospital.
The most noticeable changes
were that the shopping center
and farmland had been removed and replaced by a newly built cancer Change the spelling
centre
center
and nursing school.
By 2000, the territory of the cancer Change the spelling
centre
center
had expanded. The nursing school and parking lot had been reduced in size, Change the spelling
centre
while
the hospital and pharmacy remained in the same places without any changes
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