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this
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consequently
, most students
would like to go to study abroad as compared their
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This
essay discusses merits
and demerits of Correct article usage
the merits
this
improvement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, an
abroad education opportunities give more advantages to the Correct article usage
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students
as well as
the host nation. The main advantage is overseas pupil
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pupils
be
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to
their's family needs and wants. Change preposition
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For example
, in
many developed nations bring a lot of overseas Change preposition
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pupil
from other parts of the world Fix the agreement mistake
pupils
as a result
, they can earn a
massive capital from Correct article usage
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students
in order to they can use this
money on the
hoist state infrastructure developments. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, globalisation is the main reason for this
modern trend.
Certainly, this
trend has some demerits one possible drawback is the students
face cultural
shock when they enter a Add an article
a cultural
forgien
and they get Correct your spelling
foreign
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they miss their family and friends. For example
, according to
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as well as
culture. Furthermore
, another drawback is some person has decided to face suicide because they cannot accept and adopt the new admosphere
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atmosphere
To conclude
, certainly, this
phenomenon has merits as well as
demerits. I think it's depends
on the person's mindset and situation. I hope Change the verb form
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this
trend is conducive for the next generation to build a harmony
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