You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts information about the
distnict
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distinct
district
types of transportation was using to reach
to
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apply
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their work
in particular
European
city
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cities
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between 1960,1980 and 2000. After analysing the bar chart, it can be seen clearly that in 1960, approximately 17% of buses were used by the workers who were going to their jobs in a specific town,
whereas
in 1980, it increased by nearly 9% and in 2000, it was recorded at almost 15%. In the case of
cars
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it started from
nearby
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nearly
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6% in the first year, but in the next year it arrived at near about 23%
as well as
in the
last
year, it was
the
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apply
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transport which was the more used for their occupation purpose. Moving
further
, from 1960 to 1980, a difference
wasseen
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was seen
only 5% in the utilized bikes,
while
in 2000, employees used to bike nearly 6%.
Lastly
, in 1960, the majority of people was preferring to go anywhere by
walk
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walking
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,
however
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after 40 years human beings were going
public
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in public
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or private vehicles.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the maximum mode of transport used car for the work field in 2000, whilst in 1960 , the minimum use of it.
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