You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts information about the
distnict
types of transportation was using to reach Correct your spelling
distinct
district
to
their work Change preposition
apply
in particular
European city
between 1960,1980 and 2000.
After analysing the bar chart, it can be seen clearly that in 1960, approximately 17% of buses were used by the workers who were going to their jobs in a specific town, Fix the agreement mistake
cities
whereas
in 1980, it increased by nearly 9% and in 2000, it was recorded at almost 15%. In the case of cars
it started from Add a comma
,cars
nearby
6% in the first year, but in the next year it arrived at near about 23% Correct your spelling
nearly
as well as
in the last
year, it was the
transport which was the more used for their occupation purpose.
Moving Correct article usage
apply
further
, from 1960 to 1980, a difference wasseen
only 5% in the utilized bikes, Correct your spelling
was seen
while
in 2000, employees used to bike nearly 6%. Lastly
, in 1960, the majority of people was preferring to go anywhere by walk
, Wrong verb form
walking
however
after 40 years human beings were going Add a comma
,however
public
or private vehicles.
Change preposition
in public
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the maximum mode of transport used car for the work field in 2000, whilst in 1960 , the minimum use of it.Submitted by deepikanayyar1996
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