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The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.
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The table illustrates the information regarding the literacy
percentage
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 in different regions between
males
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 and
females
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 from 2000 to 2004.The data is calibrated in
percentage
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.
Overall
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, the male
population
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 had the maximum rates in Europe
whereas
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females
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 had the minimum
percentage
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 in Africa. At a fleeting glance,in
Europe
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,Europe
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 the male community had a greater
percentage
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 as compared to other regions.In Africa,
females
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 had less percentile which was 53.9% as compared to
males
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.
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, in America and Oceania
females
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 were slightly less educated whilst to the male
population
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 which was 93.2% and 92.7% respectively.The number of educated
males
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 was less in Africa. Probing ahead,in America the society of
males
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 who were educated was slightly more as compared to the female
population
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.Interestingly,the world had 77.3% of the female community were educated whilst
males
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.
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, in ,Asia the community of women's literacy rate was less by 10.4%
in contrast
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 to
males
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.The Ocenia had a 94.2%
population
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 of
males
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 and 92.7% of
females
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, males, females, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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