The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.
The table illustrates the information regarding the literacy
percentage
in different regions between
males
and
females
from 2000 to 2004.The data is calibrated in
percentage
.
Overall
, the male
population
had the maximum rates in Europe
whereas
females
had the minimum
percentage
in Africa. At a fleeting glance,in
Europe
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the male community had a greater
percentage
as compared to other regions.In Africa,
females
had less percentile which was 53.9% as compared to
males
.
Moreover
, in America and Oceania
females
were slightly less educated whilst to the male
population
which was 93.2% and 92.7% respectively.The number of educated
males
was less in Africa. Probing ahead,in America the society of
males
who were educated was slightly more as compared to the female
population
.Interestingly,the world had 77.3% of the female community were educated whilst
males
.
Furthermore
, in ,Asia the community of women's literacy rate was less by 10.4%
in contrast
to
males
.The Ocenia had a 94.2%
population
of
males
and 92.7% of
females
.

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