The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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line graph

illistrates

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illustrates

the number of people, who visit one of a

caribbean

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Caribbean

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island

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islands

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during a

paricular

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particular

period of time. There is a considerable increase of travellers visiting

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place over

these 7 years period

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this 7 years period

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in the early

period

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people preferred staying on

island

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the island

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, later it has been changed as most of them used to stay on cruise ships. Between 2010 and 2017, there is a dramatic improvement

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visitors by 2.5

millions

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while

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the number of travellers who stay on cruise ships has been rose markedly by 1.5

millions

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. The crowd who used to stay is

plateued

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plateaued

since 2013, and

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shows

slight

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decline

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0.5

millions

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million

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

112 words

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The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Problem: International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local habitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?

Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Will the benefits of this outweigh the problems associated with it?

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and museum, is a wast of money. Government must invest this money in public service instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?