News stories on TV and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion?

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There is no doubt that stories with a picture on TV or in newspapers nowadays are widely used. Some individuals claim that these movie

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are more impressive than

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. I completely agree with

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point of view, in the forthcoming sentence I shall explain in detail. on the one hand, pictures are easy to read and understand. children and young people who can not read texts, watch pictures and find out the subject of the article.

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, some one picture can explain

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of one thousand

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, you imagine seeing a painting that a little boy watching a hill of rubbish next to a river bank, it can say a long story about a global issue.

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, most of the time people do not have adequate time to read in order to gain meaning from the

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they have to

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the images and skim subjects.

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, films usually are more attractive than

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, because they are full of colours and attractions that appeal to people to read related texts.

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, in ,magazines we can see a variety of paintings that persuade individuals to watch and buy them ,

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, using a picture next to

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are effective than pure text only.

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, I agree that pictures are better at telling stories compared to

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because they are readable and practical.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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231 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convey
emotions
visual aids
retain
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language barriers
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comprehensive
critical thinking skills
sensitive content
graphic
disturbing
emotional well-being

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