Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people all over the world nearly possess a
smartphone
even some younger
children
, who spend a lot of time on the device. Everyone has their own opinion of
this
phenomenon, and I will present mine and explain it in succeeding paragraphs. First of all, it is true that a variety of digital products have emerged in our daily life and changed our living style to a large extent under the extremely fast development of technology and science.
Due to
the technological boom, many new jobs have emerged and human society is operating faster, so the
overall
economic level of people has increased.
Thus
, parents can afford a
phone
as well as
another for their child.
Moreover
, modern
children
get a
smartphone
at a very young age,
they
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view highly stimulating content,
such
as video games or short videos.
This
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leads to less patience they owned than the earlier generation, so they prioritize killing leisure or study time via watching
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highly stimulating
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scense
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scenes
rather than reading or playing with friends in reality. The progress of technology definitely will bring out many new things,
such
as
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, computers and
smartphone
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etcetera. In my opinion, all products are effective
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field,
smartphone
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is
also
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the
phone
we used decides on the
phone
is positive or negative for humans. To
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,
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smartphone
without parental intervention is most likely a bad thing for
children
's
study
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or social, because young
children
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adequate self-control. But if parents offer correct guidance, it is definitely a good thing,
such
as teaching offspring how to learn a foreign language assisted by the
phone
.
To conclude
, exercising smartphones in moderation and in the right way is a positive thing no matter for adults or
children
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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