Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people all over the world nearly possess a

smartphone

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even some younger

children

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, who spend a lot of time on the device. Everyone has their own opinion of

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phenomenon, and I will present mine and explain it in succeeding paragraphs. First of all, it is true that a variety of digital products have emerged in our daily life and changed our living style to a large extent under the extremely fast development of technology and science.

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the technological boom, many new jobs have emerged and human society is operating faster, so the

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economic level of people has increased.

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, parents can afford a

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as well as

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another for their child.

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, modern

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get a

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at a very young age,

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view highly stimulating content,

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as video games or short videos.

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behavior

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behaviour

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leads to less patience they owned than the earlier generation, so they prioritize killing leisure or study time via watching

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highly stimulating

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scense

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scenes

rather than reading or playing with friends in reality. The progress of technology definitely will bring out many new things,

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as

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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, computers and

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smartphone

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smartphones

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etcetera. In my opinion, all products are effective

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field,

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smartphone

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is

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, and the way

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apply

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the

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we used decides on the

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is positive or negative for humans. To

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,

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smartphone

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without parental intervention is most likely a bad thing for

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study

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or social, because young

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adequate self-control. But if parents offer correct guidance, it is definitely a good thing,

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as teaching offspring how to learn a foreign language assisted by the

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.

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, exercising smartphones in moderation and in the right way is a positive thing no matter for adults or

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.