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Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

#businesses #profit
Businesses are essential in our life. Many entrepreneurs invest their money and time to bring new good things or services. The main idea of any work is to get some profit from what they want to realize. On the one
hand
, whatever they do or provide results from good earnings. They need to spend a lot of time and resources to get positive feedback from your
business
.
Moreover
, they have an additional risk which they get when they start their field.
Therefore
,
that is
 why they expect to get benefits from what they do.
On the other
hand
, we can see many businesses in our life where entrepreneurs spend a lot of time, and they do not get and do not expect profit from their own company or their activities, which the governments or some non-profit organizations support. In my opinion, on the one
hand
, there exist some activities or businesses where they are not able to get some acquisition from it, but it is important for real life and society. Those ideas have to be supported by governments but
on the other
hand
, we have some ideas in the world that were created to get income. Entrepreneurs must realize those ideas with only good interest because they will be supported by a free market, and they will not depend on governments or some organizations.
Moreover
, if they have a more flexible
business
, they have more opportunities to develop
this
business
 and to get more money and
also
 reinvest
this
 income for the new
business
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