The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport
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This
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chart represents information about crimes that occurred in three different areas of illegal activities in Newport City between 2003 and 2008.
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it is clear that
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at the beginning burglary and
car
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theft were close but in 2007
car
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theft overtook the number of burglaries.
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, if we look at burglary it was the most popular crime and reached its peak in 2004 achieving 3700 incidents.
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the next year it experienced a downward trend until 2008 when it hit a trough of 1200 occasions.
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surging for over 4 years there was an upward trend by the end of the period in question.
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according to
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the data from the chart episodes of
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thefts decreased after 2005 making it 2100.
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it was stable changing only a little bit. From 2009 it grew little and by the end of ,2012 it was near to the original 2700.
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but not least there is a robbery that was changing throughout the era.
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sort of crime was not even close to burglary and
car
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theft. It reached its peak in 2005 with a total of 800 incidents.
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after three
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it reached the lowest point of 500 crime episodes and
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finally
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for the rest of it was stable only with little changes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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