The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults who received qualifications from a range of education providers in three years.
The given bar graph illustrates the
proportions
of adults who got qualifications from a set of education
providers
in three years.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the
proportions
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proportion
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of people who received qualifications from all
providers
had a significant increase over the whole period, with the exception of
trades
.
Moreover
, high
school
graduates made up most of the qualified adults throughout the given period. In terms of the education
providers
with the highest and lowest percentages, high
school
started at 23 in 1981. It grew gradually over the next two decades, peaking at 28. Meanwhile,
trades
stood at almost half the
proportions
of high
school
at 11% at the start and saw no change in percentage over the period. Regarding the two other education
providers
, college and university began at just below
trades
at 9 and 10 respectively. They rose moderately by 3 in the following decade, before experiencing a drastic spike to reach
its
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peak at 18 in 2001. Despite surpassing
trades
, both college and university still had lower
proportions
than high
school
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportions, providers, trades, school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 4 times.
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