Some young people are leaving the country side to live in cities and towns leaving only young people in the countryside’s. What problems are caused by this issue ? what can be done to solve this situation

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, nowadays there is a trend among the younger generation to leave their homes in rural areas in order to move into cities and towns.

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is mainly

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the better opportunities and facilities that urban areas offer. First and foremost, several problems have arisen already

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the above matter. When young

people

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leave the

countryside

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, the labour force becomes insufficient.

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such

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places will not be either developed or increased with job opportunities

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the lack of human resources.

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, there can be certain social issues as well.

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, older parents might be departed from their children and they might have to spend the retirement period at elderly homes without their beloved family members. When it comes to solutions, without any discrimination facilities and infrastructure of the

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should be improved

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. So , more investors will come and build companies in

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areas widening numerous career paths.

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, if there are various jobs in the

countryside

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with good salaries and benefits,

people

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will retain them without moving to urbanized places.

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people

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can live together happily with their families and friends. At present, cities offer better jobs, education and economic situation

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having equal chances everywhere, will encourage

people

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to remain in their birthplaces without shifting to the towns.

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according to

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my point of view, various issues occur when some youngsters leave the

countryside

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in order to live in cities and towns. As per the above content, these matters can be resolved by giving equal opportunities to everyone despite of location.

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