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The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is evident for some that
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 ought to concentrate on supporting sport and
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 in
schools
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 more
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 than in communities of people. From my perspective, I absolutely agree that it is better for
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 to promote cultural activities in
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 in comparison with groups of people. First of all, by promoting
art
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 and
sports
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 in school, the
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 takes care of children’s health and well-being which helps them to perform in a good way.
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, these teenagers being a part of their families and groups of friends are able to make a great impact on their parents and peers around them.
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, today’s juveniles will be adults and parents, and if they continue following a healthy and cultural lifestyle, the country probably would develop more significantly. Building hockey facilities in
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,
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, allows the
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 to encourage young boys to become successful hockey players in the future representing their country at the Olympic games.
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, promoting
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 and
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 in school might reduce crimes among juveniles
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 their busyness with other more beneficial things. It is obvious that many kids commit a crime in their free time when they do not have anything to do.
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, it should be the
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’s responsibility to form regulations for
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 in terms of extracurricular activities
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 as
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 and
art
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 in order to avoid children being involved in committing a crime. Take an example, in private high
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 in developed countries, there is an exception to face drug abuse compared with some state
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 their programs with no additional
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 and
art
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 classes. In conclusion, I totally agree that the most efficient for the
government
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 is to invest a lot in sport and
art
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 in school for children’s health and the country’s well-being in the future.

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