these days, many people have their own computer and telephones, so it is quite easy for them, to do their work at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages
In today's world, there is no doubt that most
of
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people
have Add an article
the people
their
personal Correct pronoun usage
apply
phone
and computer. Fix the agreement mistake
phones
Therefore
, it is quite possible for them to have a
distance Correct article usage
apply
work
. In my point of view, main
advantages of working at home are Correct article usage
the main
an
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the
opportiunity
to have a good balance between Correct your spelling
opportunity
work
and live
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possibility
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the possibility
a possibility
work
for huge
international company.
On the one hand, working online may be Add an article
a huge
good
idea if Change the article
a good
people
prefer to live in a rural area, but want to work
for big
company. As some Add an article
a big
people
like to travel more than two time
per year, Change to a plural noun
times
online
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an online
job
will be Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
good
way to do it. Add an article
a good
Thus
, the technologies give us amazing opportiunity
to live in a good environment Correct your spelling
opportunity
out
of the cities or travel a Change preposition
outside
lot
and till
be a part of a big corporation. Correct your spelling
still
For instance
, more than 30 per cent of workers for Amazon and Google might work
online from time
to time
.
Apart from
this
, a lot
of people
do not want to spend a lot
of time
not only for
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commute
also
they do not want waste
money Fix the infinitive
to waste
for
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on
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a car
the car
car
or public transport. I think that working at home may save money and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
time
for more important things such
as family and hobby
. Fix the agreement mistake
hobbies
For instance
, most of
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people
who live in Add an article
the people
a
big cities spend more than one hour Correct article usage
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to commit
to their workplaces. Change the verb form
committing
Accordingly
, a lot
of people
waste more than two hours every day that could be spend
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be spent
be spending
for
friends or Change preposition
with
relax
.
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relaxing
To sum up
, I believe that working at home has a lot
of advantages such
as edditional
free Correct your spelling
additional
time
and possibility
to live where you want.Add an article
the possibility
a possibility
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...