The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident. People all over the world wear the same fashions, watch the same t.v. channels, use the same brands and have similar eating habits. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
We clearly observe that uniqueness decreases in nations all over the globe.
People
have the same choices of food, clothes and even for t.v. programmes. In my opinion,
this
trend has its own drawbacks and benefits. 
To begin
with, having the same food apparel, vehicle choices
along with
other branded items of different origins can make the life of humans so easy. That they can conveniently adjust themselves wherever they had to settle.
For example
, students from the subcontinent go to Europe or America for
further
studies. They adjust easily.
This
trend has a positive effect on the country's economy. As someone has the knowledge of their business strategy so it's tranquil for them to increase trade.
For instance
, organisations make that product which they use and
then
export it. So, the economic situation gets better.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks of globalisation. One of the main is that
people
lose their traditions.
For example
, someone goes to another country and melts into their culture. And forget their own costumes.
Moreover
,
people
also
have psychological issues like they lost their identity and living in their environment.
People
also
adapt their eating habits like their favourite restaurants becoming k.f.c. and McDonald's and they go their mostly and neglect their cultural foods that have a negative effect on their health.
To conclude
, every trend has its own pros and cons. As
people
have opportunities to get a better lifestyle but there is a risk to get far from their culture. So, from my ,perspective it has a huge impact on someone's life.
Submitted by mirzasibghatullah on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: