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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

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These days,
people
 have a lot of choices in their own lives. Some of the prefer to be
a
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self-employed,
while
 others prefer to
work
 as
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an employee
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employee
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employees
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. These two options are very different
ones
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and each of them has its own advantages and disadvantages. Working as a self-employed brings many benefits.
Firstly
, the amount of time that they have to spend
for
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work
 would be more flexible than the office's time. They can spend more time with their family or do their homework.
Secondly
, some
people
 cannot socialize at
work
. It is because they are just being
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an introvert
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introvert
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person
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people
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 or they do not want to have annoying
coworker
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.
Finally
, an employee can always find a more interesting job with a higher salary.
On the other hand
, being a freelance
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 several disadvantages.
To begin
 with,
people
 who do not
work
 in a factory or company, cannot have insurance which is entirely beneficial for every
workers
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. By having
a
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good insurance
people
 are able to use many services
such
 as medicine and hospital at reasonable costs.
In addition
,
employed
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of
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 any organization are
being
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given advantages during
working
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the working
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 year. They can have loans and financial aid for buying
house
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a house
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 or car.
For instance
, in
MVM
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 car factory, all the
labors
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 after working
two
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 years loyalty will be able to purchase one of the vehicles
15
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% below the real value. Actually, freelancers have to
work
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 their money more to have those facilities.
To sum up
, many employers leave their
work
 to
work
seperately
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separately
 to have better income and
work
 from their
comfort-zone
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,
However
, they would not be able to utilize workers' benefits as much as employed
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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