The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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bar chart depicts universal

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of the top brands of cell phones from 2009 to 2013. It's clear from the graph that the

Samsung

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and

Nokia

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phones had the most significant merchants in

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period.

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what is shown, in 2009 we can see the

Nokia

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brand have the most selling which is reached about 498

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. And,

Samsung

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came after with an amount of nearly 248

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we can see

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company have a huge

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and it's almost reached about 10 counts and

ZTE

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has almost 150

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,

LG

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represented nearly 120

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.

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in 2011 we can see various merchants,

Nokia

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also

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have approximately the same level in increasing which is about 435

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Samsung

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have a minor increase with about 320

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and

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gradually grew and their

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reached about 99,

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had dropped slightly in

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year and

ZTE

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represented a slight increase almost can notice.

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2013 we can see in the graph

Samsung

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had

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soared with 450 and

Nokia

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came after with 250 sellings and

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continue in grew and reached 150,

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and

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had not that match changes,

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for

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and 51sales for

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.

To sum up

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, we could say that

Samsung

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and

Nokia

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brands seem active in the work face in comparison with

Apple

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,

LG

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, and

ZTE

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which have

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that active during these years.