You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - Describe what you enjoyed about the course - Say how much cooking you have done since the course - Suggest another cookerycourse you'd like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my gratitude for the recent
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that I attended at your school
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and to provide some feedback on my experience. I enjoyed so much in the
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.
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, I enjoyed
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an Italian dish
first
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time.
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, I really liked the way of cooking that learnt
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my instructor.
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, I liked the way how to make seasoning for particular dishes. After that
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, I made so many dishes for my family and friends. My daughter liked Thai
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so much
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, I made a Thai dish for her, and she really liked it.
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, I
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tried to make
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a Pizza
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base with the help of your booklet, and it was
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good and tastable.
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, I would request you to arrange another
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about how to make Chineses Food. I am really waiting for your next session. Thank you once again for
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great
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you did. I very much hope that you will be able to arrange
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. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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