Young people are much more aware of and concerned abour issues like environment, poverty and animal welfares than prerious generations. What is your opinion?

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Many people believe that nowadays consciousness and awareness about global issues like the environment, poverty and animal welfare among young people are much more than before. I completely agree with

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particular point and discussed all the apparent reasons. In our daily, life we are depending on technology, which has reduced our labour activity

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global communication.

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is very familiar for our new

generation

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they can take any kind of activity with the help of technology and they are using social media and different types of portals for virtual communication to every corner of the world. Nowadays they can take any initiative from anywhere, for, example our surroundings we show that pollution is created by a different type of industry who are not following govt. regulation and act

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we see wild nature hampered by modern civilization. Our new

generation

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takes photos and videos by uploading them to social media.

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our local govt. taking action against the defaulter and other people can see

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social media. It is happening to the young

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our grandparents are not more concerned about

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reason

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the lack of communication and technological unavailability

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they have taken physical action against them for

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particular fact. The environmental pollution, poorness and wild planets are threatened by a group of wealthy concerns; they have a lot of power and money and are corrupted to a particular point but govt. cannot find them.

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, the old

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is not used to the new technology and how to make a virtual protest against the main defaulter for that reason it affected them. So it is very true that now our young concern much more conscious of any problematic issue. In conclusion,

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is a very positive thing for our new youth, they have learned to assert their rights in every part. So we can get a good world by our upcoming

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Young people are much more aware of and concerned abour issues like environment, poverty and animal welfares than prerious generations. What is your opinion?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of air and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree ?

In recent year sports star have become increasingly famous and wealthy. For some this is a benefit, raising the profile of sports, but for others it is a negative influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The number of students who choose to study mathematics at university is low. Why do you think this is? What can be done about this situation?