You live in a small university town. Last week, you drove to a big city about two hours away to buy a new laptop at a good price. You worked on the laptop all week and finished writing a long assignment that is due shortly. However, this week, the laptop doesn't even switch on. Write to the store. In your letter: •Tell the store where you live & what happened •Explain the problem with the laptop •State what action you would like the store to take
#university #town #week #city #two #hours #laptop #price #assignment #doesn #switch #store #•tell #•explain #•state #action
Dear sir or madam
I'm your new
clent
. I am renting a university dorm room outside of the city. I need a new Correct your spelling
client
clients
laptop
immediately and came to your store based on an advertisement. I was delighted when I discovered that you've offered a lot of choices and that your expenses are so reasonable. I used the laptop
to work for a while
without any problems, but soon after, it suddenly shut down, had very little power and the letters on the keyboard stopped working. I was worried because I had a lot of classes to complete. Mine
assignment is done. I'm unable to continue using Correct pronoun usage
My
this
laptop
, though. Instead
of buying me a new laptop
to replace my broken one, I just want my money back. Furthermore
, there is no transportation system in our region, so I needed to walk a considerable distance to arrive at your store. Secondly
, your salespeople don't treat customers well. I hope you will fix this
as well. Please return my money immediately. I hope you understand me.
Yours sincerely
EzozaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task achievement
Start your letter with a clear introduction, specifying the date of purchase and the type of laptop you bought.
task achievement
Ensure to ask about returning the laptop within the store's policy window or specify if there's a warranty.
coherence cohesion
Improve the flow of your letter by organizing thoughts into distinct paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Add transitions and linking words to make your writing smoother and enhance readability.
task achievement
You clearly explained the problem with the laptop.
task achievement
You stated the action you would like the store to take clearly.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.