The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The given line graph illustrates the quantity of two types of

travelers

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travellers

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(staying on the ships and staying on

island

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the island

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) which were contained over the

last

seven years from 2010 to 2017. Units were measured in millions.

Overall

,

total

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a total

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number

of tourists coming to a Caribbean

Island

almost rose

up

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every year. It decreased slightly in 2016.

On the other hand

, the graph of

travelers

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living in the ships and the

number

of

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a foreigner

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foreigner

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foreigners

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living on the

island

fluctuated at the first of the given period of time. With regards to

number

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a number

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of visitors staying on the

island

maintained

around

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0.7

million

from 2010 to 2011 and after

that

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it went up and decreased surprisingly in 2016 but it became a peak at 1.5

million

in 2017.

Contrasted

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with

number

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a number

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of visitors staying on the cruise ships,

it

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increased to 0.5

million

in the first year and became the lowest point in 2012.

Afterward

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, it rose

up

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constantly and reached a peak at 2

million

in 2017.