some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

historical monuments allow us to peek inside ancient times. many folks argue that authorities should demolish ancient

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and construct

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the modern era.

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, I disagree with the notion owing to the fact that these

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are a great example of ancient architecture

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provide a plethora of information about the past. commencing with the most prominent reason why governments should keep

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is that they are rich

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of evidence of history.

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, most of the kings used monuments as a tool to depict their strength and to spread messages all over the continents.

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, Ashoka the Great,

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many manuscripts on pillars and temples. destroying them means our upcoming generation will

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and become unknown from many incidents that happened in the old times.

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, some

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are associated with the culture of many societies and demolishing them can cause a disruptive and chaotic situation which ultimately leads to disturbance in society. apart from that, ancient

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can provide an opportunity to get

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experience by observing and analysing the structure how resources were used , and many other facts. To exemplify it, the pyramids in Giza provide a vast amount of knowledge about the past civilization by observing the paintings and tombs of kings who lived there.

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, analysing the use of historical monuments to enhance our perspective about our ancestors , authorities should preserve them

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of demolishing them.

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, after knowing the importance and credibility

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our understanding of the history, of ancient

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. people should not argue about the destruction of historical

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