Write a letter to the Information Officer at the TAPE Information Office asking for information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Describe your educational background and your reasons for wanting to do the course. You should write at least 80 words. Allow yourself 15 minutes for this task.

#information #officer #tape #office #preparation #certificate #background #course #minutes

Dear Sir, My name is Amandeep Singh and I am writing

this

letter to inquire about the details of the TPC course beginning next week. To give you a brief about my academics, I have done my schooling at Hartmann College and the Chartered Accountancy program from the ICAI. Currently, I am working for Barclays Bank as an Assistant Manager. As I am free on weekends, I want to do an extra activity to keep myself occupied. As

this

program has huge demand in the market, I wish to obtain a certification in

this

field. When I saw your advertisement in the newspaper regarding the course, I couldn't resist.

Also

, I tried to contact the mentioned number but had no luck.

Therefore

, can you please tell me the other specifics regarding the course so that I can register myself? Hope to hear from you soon. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Amandeep Singh.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

153 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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