You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - say how you feel about his perfomace - give details of your musical activities - explain hoy you would like him to help you with your musicial activities.

Dear Jack, I am writing to express my feeling
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the performance you did
in
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the
last
concert. My name is Milav, and I am a street singer.
Firstly
, I really liked your
voice
and
lyrics
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of the song you have sung. You have sung smoothly, and your words directly touched
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my heart. I really adored your performance.
Secondly
, I would like to describe my musical activities. I have been singing in a club and on a street
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last
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five years. I have some fans who really appreciate my
voice
.
Moreover
, I frequently go
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the party to sing a song. Even though I am a good singer, I want to improve my vocal
voice
.
Lastly
, I have a dream to sing songs in front of audiences.
However
, I have no extra teams to perform together in front of people. I would request you if you know any musicians who play band
then
can you please connect me with them?
Moreover
, I need to improve my
voice
in some conditions. So, can you help me on
this
matter? I very much hope that you will be able to help me
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this
situation. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Milav Soni
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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