The pie charts show the number of hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student population.

The pie charts show the number of hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates and the total student population.
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The pie
charts
provide information on the
amount
of
time
spent by
undergraduates
,
postgraduates
, and the total student population in a British university
library
.
Overall
, the
charts
reveal that
postgraduates
spent the most
time
in the
library
,
while
undergraduates
used the
library
the least. A significant majority of
postgraduates
spent more than 15 hours in the
library
,
while
only a small minority of
undergraduates
studied for the same
amount
of
time
. Looking more closely at the
charts
, we can see that 63% of
undergraduates
spent between 1 and 7 hours in the
library
,
while
only a tiny fraction of
postgraduates
studied for the same
amount
of
time
.
Instead
, more than half of
postgraduates
(55%) spent over 15 hours in the
library
, compared to just 9% of
undergraduates
. In summary, the
charts
show that
postgraduates
are more likely to spend a significant
amount
of
time
studying in a university
library
compared to
undergraduates
.
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