A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
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's qualities are rather
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people
think that social status and wealth are the most important things, while
others are convinced that kindness and dignity are far more crucial. I fully agree with opinion
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can do nasty and awful things. What I mean, if
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achievements
such
as popularity or astonishing
amount of money in the bank, it will not mean that he is a good Correct article usage
an astonishing
person
. For instance
, nowadays tabloids provide a lot of information about different celebrities, who was
involved in scandals. Correct subject-verb agreement
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and
social status, but they are not good friends and in many Correct word choice
or
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even not appropriate family members.
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Furthermore
, today a lot of people
prefer to avoid toxic and unpleasent
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unpleasant
people
even if they are has a lot of influential connections. Additionally
, today some individuals put their effort to get rid of bad people
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with recognising and avoiding people
with unpleasant qualitiies
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qualities
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In conclusion, I am convinced that it is far more important to judge people
by their actions and behaviour than by their social status. Although
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