The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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The charts give information on the
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for families possessing and borrowing
accommodation
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Looking at the chart more closely, in 1918, the percentage of families living in their own
accommodation
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was just under 80%,
whereas
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that of
households
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borrowing
accommodation
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was just over 20%, which was the lowest in that period. In 1939, approximately 68% of England and Wales people rented
houses
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which decreased compared to 1918,
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around 30% of both countries purchased
houses
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which increased compared to 1918. In 1953, the figures for both possessing and renting remained the same. In 1971, the figures for owned and rented
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were identical, at about 50%,
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in 1981, the percentage of
households
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purchasing
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soared to 60%,
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that of people renting
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shrank to 40%. In 1991, the
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for families living in their own
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still had an upward trend and reached just under 70%,
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the
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for
households
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borrowing
houses
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had a downward trend and dropped to just over 30%. In 2011, the
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for
households
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in owned
accommodation
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finished an upward trend and drop to about 65% from just under 70%,
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the
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for
households
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in renting
accommodation
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increased to about 35% from just over 30%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, accommodation, households, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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