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The local taxes resource is 102.3m, which is ranked number two.

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The given table and chart illustrated the police budget that the money spent in what categories and the sources came from 2017 to 2018 in Britain.
Overall
, it was noticed that the table keeps an upward tendency of the source from 304.7 in 2017 to 318.6 in 2018. Meanwhile, The categories that account for the highest
percentage
 of money spent in both 2017 and 2018 are salary. The buildings and transport remain the fixed
percentage
 in both two years. Technology has increased from 2017 to 2018. It can be seen from the pie chart that salary took up about 69% in 2018. The
percentage
 increase in technology is the same as the
percentage
 decrease in salary, which is 6
percent
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. The table gives information about sources, which the most is the national government about 177.8m in 2018. The following small date is other sources about 38.5%. The local taxes resource is 102.3m, which is ranked number two.
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