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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the daily amplitude temperature in two Australian cities, Brisbane and Canberra. Meanwhile, in the other graph, we may appreciate the number of rainy
days
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 in each month in both cities as well.
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, we may infer each city experiments
different
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with different
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 precipitation regimes, depending on the season they are in. In Brisbane, during the summer season, rainy
days
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 increase,
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 in Canberra
this
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 tendency seems to be turnback. A closer look at Brisbane shows us that during the months of January, February, and March the daily amplitude is minimum, variating between 1
°C
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 to 5
°C
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, and there is a high level of rainy
days
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 in each month, between 13 to 14
days
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.
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, Canberra has a more significant growth in its daily amplitude during the entire year, achieving a variation between 15
°C
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 to 20
°C
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 during the winter season, where the rainy
days
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 in these months are máximun, variating between 10 to 5.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words days, °c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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