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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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These days,
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 are facing home recycled issues. Some
people
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 think that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. I completely agree with
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 view and I will discuss these in
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 article. The first reason is that some men and women don't know what sort of things are recycled or non-recycled, so, that's why the
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 of recycled is less.
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, the government should put some recycled or non-recycled signs with shapes on top of each garbage.
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, the government can teach
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 by holding educational classes or putting up some signs to increase recycling. The second reason is that some boys and girls don't want to follow the rules.
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 the politicians should make serious laws with huge penalties.
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, it needs to be the
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 of unknown police in the streets to give penalties to
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 who don't put things into the right garbage.
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, the
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 of recycling will be increased.
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, some societies think that the regime should pay huge money for holding classes or putting signs up or the
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 of police on the streets, so, these are a waste of money.
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, recycling is an important issue which helps to have fresh air.
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, countries need to pay attention to
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 problem. In conclusion, recycling plays an important role in all countries because it causes fresh air, that's why politicians from different countries should pay budget on
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 problem.
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