The maps show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The given map demonstrates plans for future developments in the southwest airport in the year ahead.
Overall
, it is clear that
the airport will change a lot in a year, and a lot of services will be built. Also
, it is apparent that there will be more gates
and the concourse will be designed to be Y-shaped.
For the departures side, check-in will be relocated to the right side of the lobby and a bag drop will be built in its former position. Moreover
, there will be two entrances instead
of one, and right next to the gates
, a new cafe will be developed. In addition
, shops will be found right after walking past the security.
For the arrivals, on the other hand
, there will be a cafe built on the left just after passing the customs. Furthermore
, an ATM will be found beside it and car-hiring services will be developed next to the two exit gates
. Additionally
, the walkway will be replaced by a sky train and there will be 18 gates
available instead
of 8 for boarding.Submitted by ahmedhany98 on
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