The maps show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The given map demonstrates plans for future developments in the southwest airport in the year ahead.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the airport will change a lot in a year, and a lot of services will be built.

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, it is apparent that there will be more

gates

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and the concourse will be designed to be Y-shaped. For the departures side, check-in will be relocated to the right side of the lobby and a bag drop will be built in its former position.

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, there will be two entrances

instead

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of one, and right next to the

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, a new cafe will be developed.

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, shops will be found right after walking past the security. For the arrivals,

on the other hand

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, there will be a cafe built on the left just after passing the customs.

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, an ATM will be found beside it and car-hiring services will be developed next to the two exit

gates

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Additionally

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, the walkway will be replaced by a sky train and there will be 18

gates

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available

instead

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of 8 for boarding.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

179 words

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