In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

Food
is a principal need in human life. Some people believe that it is better to have international
junk
food
rather than countries' specific
meals
,
while
others claim replacing fast
food
with countries' own cuisine has a negative impact on families, individuals and society itself. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. I feel
this
way for a number of reasons, which I am going to illustrate in the following paragraphs. First and foremost, having
junk
meals
will harm family gatherings. In most countries, families gather on Sunday to have their traditional
meals
. If they have snack
food
instead
of traditional cuisine,
this
ceremony will lose its meaning.
For example
, in my family, we always gather to have our traditional meal “plov” on Sundays. All the family members come on
this
day to have it and
this
is like a ceremony for us. Once we replaced it with other international
meals
such
as a pizza, but in the end, no one was satisfied with the meal and most of them went earlier at home. Everyone can eat
junk
food
on their own, but classic
meals
should be a must for family gatherings.
Last
but not least, new generations will not know the way of cooking traditional
meals
, if they are replaced with
junk
foods. Everyone learns anything by practising. If no one in the family cooks traditional
meals
, their kids will not know about the meal and the way of cooking them. My nephew’s experience is a compelling example of
this
. When my nephew was nine years old, no one in his family cooked our traditional
meals
. He mostly ordered the
meals
, since his parents worked all day.
Hence
he only had our local
meals
on Sundays when he came to his grandparents. He had no idea how to cook our local foods and I think if new generations do not value our traditional
food
,
this
will affect negatively our society. All in all, I definitely think that international
junk
meals
should not be replaced with local foods, since it has an adverse impact on families, individuals and societies.
This
is because traditional
meals
are a must in family gatherings, and new generations will not value our traditional
meals
.
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