The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information in proportion about illiteracy rates of
males
and
females
in some countries for the past year.
Overall
,
females
are more than
males
in the region and
large
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a large
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number
of
females
was
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were
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in South
Asia
. In
a
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developed countries, the
number
of
males
was around 1 per
cent
. In the Caribbean of Latin America, the
males
'
rate
was more than the other developed country which was 10 per
cent
.
Nevertheless
, in Oceania of East
Asia
, it was almost 9 Percent. In Sub-Saharan Africa, the proportion of men was double that in Latin America which was 30 per
cent
. In the Arab states, there was only 1 per
cent
lower than in Sub-Saharan Africa. South
Asia
had the highest
rate
of gents when compared to the other regions which were around 34 per
cent
.
Furthermore
, the case of
a
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number
of
females
in the developed country had almost 2 per
cent
. In the Caribbean, the
number
of women was around 11 per
cent
. In Oceania, it was more than 9 Percent of the Caribbean, which was 20 per
cent
. In Sub-Saharan Africa, the
rate
of ladies was almost half of the graph, which was around 49 per
cent
. In Arab states and South
Asia
, the calculated
rate
of women was almost 53 per
cent
and 54 per
cent
respectively
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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