The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information in proportion about illiteracy rates of
males
and females
in some countries for the past year.
Overall
, females
are more than males
in the region and large
Change the article
a large
the large
number
of females
was
in South Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Asia
.
In a
developed countries, the Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
number
of males
was around 1 per cent
. In the Caribbean of Latin America, the males
' rate
was more than the other developed country which was 10 per cent
. Nevertheless
, in Oceania of East Asia
, it was almost 9 Percent. In Sub-Saharan Africa, the proportion of men was double that in Latin America which was 30 per cent
. In the Arab states, there was only 1 per cent
lower than in Sub-Saharan Africa. South Asia
had the highest rate
of gents when compared to the other regions which were around 34 per cent
.
Furthermore
, the case of a
Correct article usage
apply
number
of females
in the developed country had almost 2 per cent
. In the Caribbean, the number
of women was around 11 per cent
. In Oceania, it was more than 9 Percent of the Caribbean, which was 20 per cent
. In Sub-Saharan Africa, the rate
of ladies was almost half of the graph, which was around 49 per cent
. In Arab states and South Asia
, the calculated rate
of women was almost 53 per cent
and 54 per cent
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