It has been suggested that primary school children should be taught how to grow vegetables and keep animals. To what extent the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

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It's been a contention of what should we teach to our school grader
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whether to do
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gardening or engage in animal care. I would argue that both are essential for the growth and development of our growing
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since doing gardening can develop basic skills
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keeping
animals
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hone a
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's emotional quotient. Introducing basic knowledge of
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growing to our school graders helps them develop important basic skills; being patient, responsible, and caring which are crucial in
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's social, emotional and cognitive development. School programs,
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as gardening are done in a group, together they will cultivate the soil before planting a seed and nourish it daily with water until it grows.
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process is all done in a patient manner, consistent and with love in order to produce food on the table without
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the
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plant will die.
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,
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will be more encouraged to do
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type of activity with other
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as well,
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improving their socialization skills. On the other hand, keeping
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at home will develop
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's emotional quotient towards
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. Having a pet at home,
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, a dog(which has loving-natured) will boost their emotions of
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for the animal,
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, it does not limit only to one animal but to the general population as observed.
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, a
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that exposes to
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type of environment usually has a loving, caring and responsible upbringing. Giving them an edge over other
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who are not exposed.
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to childs' ,safety some
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are not safe to care for, albeit there's always an option like choosing only those small
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and safe for the
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. In conclusion, I am of a balanced opinion as both have plausible advantages, compared to their disadvantages for safety issues. I would argue that learning
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gardening and animal keeping is vital for a
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's growth and development.
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