At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is commonly believed that the decrease in old
people
may have a major impact on our society, resulting in a detrimental effect on sharing their knowledge and experience with other Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
is not a crucial issue that needs to be considered. In my point of view, I highly agree that the advantages of the growth of young adults outweigh the disadvantages.
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According to
a recent study conducted by several organisations, many Linking Words
countries
are suffering from a declining Use synonyms
birthrate
making the country an ageing society. Use synonyms
For instance
, the birth rate in Korea is approximately 0.8 on average which is the worst ratio around the world. Linking Words
While
Japan, one of the first Linking Words
countries
that experienced a rapid decline in the Use synonyms
birthrate
, has been faced with an ageing society for almost 30 years and a large number of policies have been developed by politicians regarding increasing the rate over decades, they are still struggling with the issues.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
birthrate
is consistently 1.8-2.2 on average in some other Use synonyms
countries
, Use synonyms
such
as India and many European nations. In accordance with research taken by several economists, a bright future is forecasted for the economy of those Linking Words
countries
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due to
the fact that there are sufficient young Linking Words
people
to supply themselves with manpower. Use synonyms
In addition
, approximately 90% of the respondents agreed that a younger community has a more vibrant and optimistic attitude in comparison with an older community.
In conclusion, it is certain that the increase of young Linking Words
people
is a vital cog in our bright future. Use synonyms
Although
we cannot deny the benefits of having more young adults, they can only be realised by the growth of the Linking Words
birthrate
.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...