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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary schoolsuch as reading,writing and math How far do you agree or disagree?

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A part of the population thinks that computer knowledge should be considered an important subject same as reading, writing and math since primary school. I completely agree, in modern times and with the advancement of technology, where everything is done and accessible online is necessary to be able to handle them. In
this
 essay, I will explain my point of view.
To begin
 with, with the COVID-19 outbreak, it was more clear that knowing how to operate the PC was fundamental for writing homework and presenting them online.
As a consequence
, it really needed to be taught early in school.
For example
, many children with parents who don't use computers encountered difficulties in following their studies because there was no one able to help them. As well,
in addition
,
according to
 studies from 2019 to 2023, there was an increase in the number of illiterates among younger.
As a consequence
, their future is
also
 uncertain.
Furthermore
, for ensuring good possibilities for getting the job you want is recommended to have at least a good computer competence for doing properly the job.
For example
, my cousin didn't get a job as a bank consultant because she was not comfortable with using the machinery, she took a step back and dedicate a major time to learning computers before starting to work. In fact, hardware abilities make a difference
also
 in your work performance, someone with excellent use of a PC can have greater accomplishment compared to someone who has poor computing device command.
To sum up
, I agree that information technology art should be taught since grade school to keep up with modern times and ensure a proper future, taking
this
 into consideration some changes should be made in the education system.
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