Some people think that it is better to take part in team sports, while others believe that individual sports are better. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.
Some public reckons that team
sports
which are baseball or basketball benefit to
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people
. The other group think that sport
which Fix the agreement mistake
sports
people
play alone are
more effective. Change the verb form
is
This
essay will discuss these issues and underpin this
essay with relevant examples.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that playing team sports
are more valuable than personal sport. Because club exercises such
as football might have an effect on people
’s relationship confidence and leadership positively. Furthermore
, club sports
can stimulate competition and effort while
looking at other people
. It might motivate people
. For example
, Son Heung-Min who is known as a Korean Football player mentioned that fellows have an influence on me variously and they give me responsibility and encouragement. For these reasons, club sports
are more beneficial.
On the other hand
, there is no doubt that individual sports
such
as golf and cycling are more effective. Because solo
sports
might strengthen mental attitude when they compete themselves. This
is because playing sports
alone might increase self-confidence level. For example
, individual activities particularly marathons or golf, players may make effort more and more and concentrate because of their success. Hence
, solo
sports
are better than group play.
In conclusion, bally ball and baseball might affect people
’s relationship confidence and leadership positively. but swimming may strengthen mental attitude. Nevertheless
, solo
sports
may not be able to prepare for a sudden accident, also
interindividual hyper-competition might contaminate people
’s mental health. So, I believe that group exercise is more beneficial than solo
sports
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