Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The environment is destroying little by little in the modern era , and as a ,result different kinds of animal species are becoming extinct from the world . Some people assume that nations and

individuals

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need to take action to protect animals from diminishing .

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, others believe that people should focus more on issues that mankind

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facing today .

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my opinion. On the one hand, the main reason why some people are arguing to preserve

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animal species from extinction is because of an imbalance in

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nature. Today , the utilisation of natural resources is surging

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by

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, different industries are forced to clear out the forest areas and grassland to produce different resources like fossil fuels and wood

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individuals

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so that they can get rid

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the shortage of materials in

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society .

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owing to the loss of habitation for animals . Eventually , leading to an imbalance in the ecosystem , where the predators confront difficulties to find their prey to survive.

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, human beings are

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facing so many problems in

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world . It is obvious that there are fewer job opportunities nowadays in most countries . As we know

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, population rates are increasing

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by

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in every nation .

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, completion in each sector are increasing dramatically , and

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,

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are becoming poor and facing poverty in their life because of bad infrastructure in each region .

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, health problems are

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their peak points , where most

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are becoming patients because of different reasons like environment and lifestyle . Today diseases are wide spreading because of population and job stress in their life and

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, the mortality rates of many nations are decreasing

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each year.

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, it is obvious that the extinction of animals

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increasing nowadays because of the loss of

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there are

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other issues that human beings are facing in their life.

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, I think that both problems need to be solved equally because both are necessary.