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wealthy nations should assit poorer countries with humantarian relief during natural disaster.do you agree or disagree?

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Rich
countries
 should provide humanitarian relief in cash or kind to poorer
countries
 which are impacted by natural
disasters
. In the impending ,essay I will discuss both views and present my opinion .
To begin
 , natural
disasters
 bring lots of damage to human life and property. Nations which are poor financially can not
face
 these kinds of issues on their own . They need humantrainain support to
face
 the aftermath challenges of natural
disasters
.
For instance
 , In the year 2002, the Indian Ocean tsunami occurred which created havoc in India, Malaysia and Indonesia.,
Moreover
 It affected a large section of the population which is poor and run out of resources during that time. ,
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 rich
countries
 like the US , and CANADA has donated millions of dollar as humanitarian aid .
On the other hand
 , Rich
countries
face
 natural
disasters
 . The USA is the victim of most natural
disasters
 like hurricanes, tornados and bushfires. Rich
countries
face
 these hardships alone and are often left alone to
face
 the backlash of these events.
Furthermore
, Most rich nations like Australia every year faces some kind of natural calamity and
then
 have to
face
 problem on their own. No humanitarian support is provided by poor
countries
 to rich counterparts.Rich
countries
 often feel handicapped in these situations.
To conclude
, Rich
countries
 should help poor
countries
 in the event of natural
disasters
 as these events create a loss of human life, and financial hardship in these
countries
 .
Therefore
 poor
countries
 should be helped in these situations financially.
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