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Lectures were used to be a way to teach large number of students, but with the technology available for education, there is no longer justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

#lectures #students #technology #education #justification #disagree？
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With the development of high technologies and online ways of studying the necessity of
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 as a way of teaching a large number of people decreased, so there are no longer arguments to visit them. I completely agree with
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 and tend to say that
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 are an extremely inconvenient way of learning. It is undeniable that the most common type of
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 is a monologue of a professor in a big classroom, where people sometimes do not have
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 ability to see each other and the lecturer cannot control all the
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 to make them focus on a new theme. In
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 conditions,
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 are used to losing their attention. They prefer to do their own business
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 of listening to professors' new materials.
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, the percentage of new information, that can be learned during one of
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 is extremely low.
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, the proportion of
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 who preferred to listen to the lecturer at my university was quite low
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 disability to hear the teacher. With the development of new technologies, which can be used for online learning,
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 lost their popularity. It is much easier and more profitable to visit an online educational platform, where
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 can customise all the settings and hear all the definitions, pronounced by their lecturer. A lot of universities have already started using online platforms.
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, MSU uses ZOOM when it comes to teaching a large number of
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, there is no real proof that classroom
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 are still needed by universities to teach their
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 online lessons are more effective.
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